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@@ -15,23 +15,20 @@ Charles Stantham are a firm of made up solicitors who decided they wanted me to
 
 The site is a fairly basic brochure site with no particularly special requirements.
 
-And so, for this relatively simple site I decided that a 'site-builder' and a pre-made theme would be used.
+And so, for this relatively simple site I decided that a 'site-builder' would be used.
 
 ## The Theme
 
 The one chosen was [OceanWP](https://oceanwp.org/).
-This uses [Elementor](https://elementor.com/) and provides a ready made, general purpose theme that can be customised for a particular use.
 
-There were some bits of minor customisation required that were not possible through the theme's interface and so a child theme was created.
-
-Reasons for choosing OceanWP and Elementor:
+There were a number of reasons why using OceanWP is appropriate for a project such as this:
 
 * **Quick**. Using such solutions can cut development time considerably.
   This can be especially important for low budget sites.
   Instead of building a site completely from scratch, a general, existing theme can be highly customised.
-* **Flexible**. Although not as flexible as a bespoke theme, Elementor, and therefore OceanWP, is highly customisable.
+* **Flexible**. Although not as flexible as a bespoke theme, OceanWP is highly customisable.
   For features that can't be created or modified within the theme a child theme can be created and these features added on that way.
-* **Extensible**. Many features are provided as extensions to the base of Elementor.
+* **Extensible**. Many features are provided as extensions to the base theme.
   It is also not difficult to add custom functionality if needed.
 * **Lightweight**. There are a lot of popular page builders available for WordPress.
   Not all of them are, relatively speaking, as lightweight or well coded.
@@ -53,9 +50,19 @@ So, when working with WordPress, a theme developed from scratch should always be
 However, this is not always possible given time or cost restraints and compromises may need to be made.
 In these cases a site builder may be the best option.
 
+As there were some minor customisations required that were not possible through the theme's interface, a child theme was created.
+
 ## The Plugins
 
-Apart from Elementor, I used a limited number of plugins.
+The main plugin used was [Elementor](https://elementor.com/).
+
+Elementor is a 'Page Builder' that provides component based building blocks that can be added to a WordPress site and customised.
+
+This has the advantage of speeding up development time considerably but brings disadvantages similar to those discussed above for using OceanWP.
+Again, for this particular project, I felt the advantages outweighed the disadvantages.
+
+
+Apart from Elementor, a limited number of other plugins were also used:
 
 * [Contact Form 7](https://wordpress.org/plugins/contact-form-7/).  
   For a basic contact submission form, this is perfectly suitable.
@@ -74,7 +81,7 @@ Apart from Elementor, I used a limited number of plugins.
   UpdraftPlus handles these very well.
 * [WP Fastest Cache](https://wordpress.org/plugins/wp-fastest-cache/).  
   It is always better to use server side caching such as Nginx FastCGI cashing or Varnish.
-  However, in cases where this isn't practical, this plugin is a very competent solution.
+  However, in cases where this isn't practical, this plugin is a competent solution.
 * [WP Mail SMTP](https://wordpress.org/plugins/wp-mail-smtp/).  
   It can be tricky getting mail working when using WordPress within Docker containers.
   This plugin provides for a simple solution.